Recount Writing: On Sunday

WALT to use the correct structure and Language  in our Writing.
On Sunday 
On Sunday me and Josiah and William went to Kaitaia beach. 
First we got in our togs. Me and William and Josiah did some bombs. We had a competition to see who did the biggest bombs. I did the biggest bombs ever. My Mum got us lollies. They were Yum and delicious. Next we got changed back into our clothes. We went to the car because it was cold.  
We put on our puffy jackets.They were super warm.  
After that we got some munchies. We were being greedy cats.
I was happy as a clown. 
Finally we went home.

Counting in 5's and 10's

WALT count in 5's and 10's

Counting in 2's

WALT count in 2's

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Recount Writing-At the hot pools

I wanted to write my story so my readers will like it.

The hot pools.

On Saturday morning me and my family went to the pools in Whangarei for a swim.

First when we got there we went to get changed into our togs. I felt so excited. I was jumping up and down and waving my hands around.

Next I went out to the pool to have a swim. We got in the pools I bombed. SPLASH The  water was very cold. I felt freezing. My body was shivering all over. So I got out and quickly ran to the hot tub to get warmed up. I stepped into the  hot tub and it was lovely and warm.  

Recount Writing-At the Whangarei Pools.

I was learning to write my story so my readers can like it.

At Whangarei Pools
On Saturday me and Josiah went to the Whangarei Pools with my mum to have fun.  First we got dressed into our togs.  We were laughing at each other because our clothes were everywhere.  We picked them all up, shoved them into our bags and ran out to the pools.  
First we went down the waterslide. It was amazing.  We went around and around and around.  We went down it over and over and over and over.