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Friday, June 12, 2020

Recount Writing-At the hot pools

I wanted to write my story so my readers will like it.
The hot pools.
On Saturday morning me and my family went to the pools in Whangarei for a swim.
First when we got there we went to get changed into our togs. I felt so excited. I was jumping up and down and waving my hands around.
Next I went out to the pool to have a swim. We got in the pools I bombed. SPLASH The  water was very cold. I felt freezing. My body was shivering all over. So I got out and quickly ran to the hot tub to get warmed up. I stepped into the  hot tub and it was lovely and warm.  

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