Recount Writing-At the Whangarei Pools.

I was learning to write my story so my readers can like it.

At Whangarei Pools
On Saturday me and Josiah went to the Whangarei Pools with my mum to have fun.  First we got dressed into our togs.  We were laughing at each other because our clothes were everywhere.  We picked them all up, shoved them into our bags and ran out to the pools.  
First we went down the waterslide. It was amazing.  We went around and around and around.  We went down it over and over and over and over.